5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第5节
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Directions 29
Suppose you are going to graduate from the university。 Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a job。 Do not use your own name; using “Li Mei” instead。
Sample:
RESUME
Personal Data:
Name:Li Mei
Sex:Female
Address: Room 602; Dormitory Building 12;
Wuhan University
Wuhan; Hubei; 430021
Date of Birth:June 16; 1983
Place of Birth:Zunyi; Guizhou
Telephone:(027) 87273548; 13802347887
Email:angellimei@gmail
Hobbies:painting; reading; Internet surfing; dancing
Foreign Languages:English
Objective: To work as a regional sales representative who is responsible for sales activity and coordination
Education:
2002 ~ PresentStudying at Wuhan University
Bachelor of Arts in finance
1999 ~ 2002Studying at Zunyi No。 1 High School
1996 ~ 1999Studying at Zunyi No。 7 Junior High School
Work Experience: None
Special Skills and Technical Qualifications:
I am professionally trained in finance and economics。
In addition to Mandarin; I can speak; write and read English fluently。
I had two parttime jobs in Taiping pany and Zhida pany; which helped me gain some sales operation knowledge and sales planning experience。
简 历 2
语言注意点:
简历忌过长或用词空泛,提供的信息应有用、如实,编排须整齐有系统。
Directions 30
Suppose you are Tan Wen; English teacher at Taiyuan Institute of Technology。 Write a resume in about 100 words to apply for a new job in another city。
Sample:
Tan Wen
Taiyuan Institute of Technology
Taiyuan; Shanxi Province
Telephone: (0351) 6523787
Experience
2000 ~ Present
Working as a lecturer of English at Taiyuan Institute of Technology
Teaching undergraduate (nonEnglish majors) intensive reading; extensive reading; listening; writing
Teaching graduate (nonEnglish majors) writing
Education
1997 ~ 2000
Studying at Shanghai Teacher’s University
Master of Arts in American Studies
1993 ~ 1997
Studying at Shanxi University
Bachelor of Arts in English Language and Literature
1990 ~ 1993
Studying at Mianyang Senior High School
1987 ~ 1990
Studying at Mianyang No。 5 Junior High School
Personal Data
Sex: Female
Date of Birth: June 27; 1976
Place of Birth: Mianyang; Sichuan; China
Marital Status: Married; without Child
Health: Excellent
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Direction 26
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1。 describe the picture;
2。 interpret the meaning of the picture;
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题:
这道题目属于哲理类的题目,可以用多种方法来说明图中所阐述的道理,文章的安排也有多种可能性。我们可以采用一种比较独特的方式,先描述图表,在第二段中就所表达的内容进行提问,在第三段中以举例说明我们对该问题的理解和认识,最后在第四段做结。
Sample:
A miserable picture unfolds before our eyes: a flood has destroyed a whole city。 We can imagine the loss of lives and property。 Under the picture; there was a thoughtprovoking sentence: every drop of water says it is not responsible for the flood。
This picture inevitably invites a series of questions: then who is responsible for the flood? Who has demolished the houses? Who has drowned the children?
A good case in point is pollution。 Twenty years ago; most rivers were so clean—the water was drinkable and so many people went swimming and fishing。 Only two decades later; many of them became so polluted that we can no longer drink the water—fishes have died out and nobody ever swims in it or washes clothes by it。 Every one of us never thinks the industrial waste or the living garbage we once damped into the river would cause so serious a result—today the harsh reality has bee too hard to swallow。
Finally we realize that every drop of water actually is responsible for the flood。 Only if every citizen takes on his responsibility as a member of a family; a nation and the world can all of us wish to have a more beautiful future。
点评:
第一段对图表和图下的文字进行描述。这一段使用了少用的句型A miserable picture unfolds before our eyes以深化看到图画后受到的震撼。而后加入了联想性的句子We can imagine the loss of lives and property,这是不多见的。然后描述了图下的一句话。
第二段创造性地连问了三个问题,与图下的文字针锋相对,又为第三段的论述做了充分的铺垫。三个问题中,第一个问题直接与上段末句形成对立,而后面两句则是呼应首段的次句,可谓环环相扣,联系紧密。
第三段共分四句,举了污染的例子。第一句是常用句型。第二句和第三句形成了鲜明的对比——二十年前的河流清澈,二十年后的却污染严重。最后一句是关键——倾倒工业废料、生活垃圾的人也没有想到会有如此严重的后果。
最后一段是结论段,共分两句。第一句话正好与图中的话相反,这是在论述后得到的结论。第二句话引申说——每个公民都要尽自己的责任,我们才能拥有美好的明天。
心得:
在说理的文章中,找到切入点是很重要的,所以很多时候要用到举例。一般说来,有多种例子可举,并不一定哪一种就是最好的。这时由于时间有限,不可太犹豫。本文中举了污染的例子,解答了第二段中的疑问,也直接引出了末段的结论,作用非常重要,请大家用心体会。
Direction 27
Study the following pictures carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1。 describe the pictures;
2。 interpret the meaning of the pictures;
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题:
这是一个非常好的题目,我们可以这样来构思:描述图表——分析其中道理——推广到生活中——采取行动。
Sample:
In the first picture; a young girl poured a whole barrel of water on a little flower in order to help it grow more quickly。 In the second picture; the flower withered before long; and the child was crying—she wondered why things should be that way。
Trees need water to grow up; and flowers need water to bloom。 But too much water can no longer be helpful—it can only hinder their growth and even kill them。 Whenever we water trees or flowers; we should do it according to the natural principle。
Actually; whenever we take action in our daily life; we should follow the law of nature。 It is understandable for us to dream of quick success and then take immediate actions to turn it into reality; but we should not be too hasty。 If we are always in a hurry; quality often suffers; making it more difficult for us to attain the aim。
Up until now; we e to understand the meaning of the old saying “Haste makes waste” better。 We should break our great plan into small parts; analyze the feature of each part and carry it out step by step—when we follow the natural pace of development; success will soon be in our hands。
点评:
本文共分为四段。第一段描述两幅图画,突出了其中的对比。第二段分三句来阐述画中的道理。前两句话说树与花都需要水,但过多的水不但无益,反倒有害。最后一句话说浇水要符合自然规律。第三段共三句话。第一句说在日常生活中,我们应遵守自然规律。第二句说梦想快速成功然后立即采取行动是可以理解的,但是不能太着急。第三句话说如果总是匆匆忙忙,质量肯定会受影响,达到目的就更难了。最后一段两句话,第一句话说我们最终更好地理解了“欲速则不达”这句话。第二句话说了我们正确的做法——将计划拆分成小的部分,分析每部分的特点,而后一步步地付诸实施。
心得:
该文由浅入深,环环相扣,渐入佳境,源自宏观上全局的安排和微观上语言的处理。从分析画本身的道理,说到我们的日常生活,再到我们处事的具体做法,非常自然,也使人感到亲切。
在语言上,首段采用了两句简洁的描述,突出显示了对比。次段首句采用的是平行结构。次句采用了破折号表示递进。第三段中第二句采用了表转折的并列句,第三句采用了条件状语从句。第四段第二句采用了平行的动宾词组,而后使用破折号,最后使用了时间状语从句。
Direction 28
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should:
1。 describe the picture;
2。 interpret the meaning of the picture;
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题:
这道题目看似简单,却富含哲理,对我们而言是一个很好的挑战。在谋篇布局上,需要精心安排。可以这样做:在描述图画后,在第二段中直接对图中的论断进行批驳,而后在第三段拓展到社会生活中相关的方面。最后在第四段中下结论。
Sample:
In the picture; a young man is lyin