5202-考研英语考前30天狂背作文-第14节
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次段首句的perspective意思是“角度”。第四句的onechild policy表示“计划生育的一孩政策”，selfcentered personality表示“以自我为中心的个性”，mutual care and understanding表示“相互关爱和理解”。第五句中的openminded表示“思想开明的”。第六句中的pose great threats to表示“对……构成重大威胁”。
第三段中的enhance the sense of responsibility表示“加强责任感”。
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Directions 16
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 interpret the meaning；
3。 suggest possible solutions。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
该文的图画画了两个人望楼兴叹，很明显该文谈的是我国当前的房价过高、房地产行业如何良性发展的问题。
Sample：
In the picture； two people are talking about a newly built set of apartment buildings。 One says； “It is too expensive。” The other goes on to say； “How can we afford it？” It is obvious that the drawer of this picture wants to draw our attention towards our real estate industry。
Nowadays； our real estate industry has experienced such an unprecedented boom that all of us begin to consider it as too hot in one way or another。 The average price has been soaring for quite a few years。 In some big cities it seems to be out of control—it has been nearly impossible for the mon local citizens to afford a satisfactory apartment in the downtown area。 Consequently； how to create a healthier and more reasonable property market has been a problem of great importance。
Among all the possible measures； I believe the following ones are the most appropriate。 In the first place； the legislators should establish a series of policies so as to curb speculation and thus keep the price of houses at a reasonable level。 In the second place； the governments at all levels should make better use of the limited land resources by building theme munities in the suburbs。 Last but by no means the least； more economically affordable housing should be built so as to relieve the burden of mon citizens。
Only through the joint efforts of all sides can we realize the healthy development of our housing market。 Until that time； our people will surely possess their own houses and enjoy a better and more harmonious life。
点评：
该文分为四段来写。第一段先描写两个人的对话。之后末句引到主题上，即我国的房地产行业。
第二段先写当前房地产过热，而后说价格猛涨。在某些大城市里房价似乎失控——人们无力购房。末句写创造健康理性的房地产市场成为了重要问题。
第三段分三点来写应采取的措施。
最后一段做结，第一句承上段说只有各方通力合作才能实现房地产市场的健康发展。第二句说到那个时候，人们将能拥有自己的房屋并享受更好更和谐的生活。这一句是呼应第一段，非常重要。
心得：
文中real estate industry是“房地产行业”，而property market和housing market指的是房地产市场。
首段末句是引出主题的句子，请大家用心识记。
第二段首句是结果状语从句的用法。第三句有破折号的用法。第四句中有平行的形容词比较级的用法，相当精彩。
第三段首句是模板句。第二句中的curb speculation表示“遏制投机”。第三句中的theme munities表示“主题社区”。第四句中的economically affordable housing表示“经济适用房”。
末段首句是倒装句，语气强烈。第二句有两处平行结构，先有平行的动宾结构，后有形容词比较级的平行，非常引人注目，特别是后面一对，一个是以er结尾，一个是加more，显得错落有致。
Directions 17
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 interpret the meaning；
3。 make your ments。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
这道题目比较特殊——图画上没有对话，只有一个忘情弹奏的人，下面有一句极富哲理的话。而提纲中的第二点和第三点分别是阐释含义和作出评论，而不是具体的指令，这样写来难度更大，自由度也更大。
Sample：
As can be seen from the picture； a person is playing the piano—he is so much immersed in the beautiful music that he seems to forget pletely what is going on around him。 The Chinese characters below the picture say： Writing is like playing the piano—first you must learn to play by the rules； then you must forget the rules and play from your heart。 What significant and thoughtprovoking words they are！
To me； writing is a lifelong endeavor： it is often hard and frustrating at the beginning； but it often bees enjoyable and fruitful as time goes by。 First； you have to learn the fundamental knowledge and acquire the simple skills； just as you must know the keys on a piano before you can really produce a whole piece of music。 Afterwards； I believe there should a prolonged period of practice； largely characterized by recitation； analysis and imitation。 This is the period when we fully understand and deeply appreciate the beauty and excellence of masterpieces。 This is also the period when we apply the particular skills of manipulating words； fabricating sentences and creating paragraphs by imitating great writers directly。 Finally； when all of this is done； one day we will suddenly forget all those rules and regulations—like a bird flying freely in the sky； we begin to take on our own styles。 We can eventually express our ideas； feelings and emotions smoothly—like beautiful notes； words spring out from our hearts one after another； until they merge into a stream or even a river。 At that time； we can be sure to say that we begin to understand what writing is。
点评：
这篇文章写成了两段而不是三段，是非常特殊的。如果提纲中的第二点和第三点分别是给出原因和解决办法，就不能这么写。
第一段分别描述了忘情弹奏的人和图下面的一句话，而后末句用了一个感叹句。
第二段是关键段落。首先是总结性的话语。而后以时间为线索分三个阶段来写。第一个阶段只有一句话，用了类比法：你得先学会写作的基础知识和简单技能，就象认识钢琴上的键一样。第二个阶段有三句话，先说这个阶段是以背诵、分析和模仿为特征的一般较长的练习时期。而后两句话作进一步说明，这两句话是平行的：这是我们能够完全理解和欣赏经典杰作之美的时期，也是我们通过直接模仿大作家来应用具体的词、句、段的技能的时期。第三个阶段共有三句话。首先说当所有这些都完成之后，我们有一天会突然发现自己忘记了所有的规则——就象一只自由飞翔的鸟儿，我们开始有了自己的风格。而后说我们终于能够自由地表达思想和情感——就象美妙的乐章一样，词从我们的心中喷涌而出，直到汇成小溪或河流。最后一句说，直到那时，我们知道我们开始理解写作了。最后这句结语举重若轻，效果却很强烈，就象米开朗基罗弥留之际说的自己开始懂得一点点绘画了一样，看似平淡，却非常具有震撼力。
心得：
一般说来，哲理性的文章是相当有难度的。本文是一篇以类比来表达深刻道理的文章，这就需要大家先弄清一对事物之间的类比关系，体会其中的妙处，再一步步地深入细致地进行描述，这是不容易的。请大家仔细研读范文，必能在这方面有所收获。
在行文中，不断地体现开始的这种类比关系，能使主题进一步加强。这在第二段的第一个和第三个时期均有明显的体现。
Direction18
Study the following picture carefully and write an essay in which you should：
1。 describe the picture；
2。 list the advantages and disadvantages of urbanization；
3。 draw your conclusion。
You should write 160~200 words neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2。
审题：
由于提纲清晰，这篇文章的结构易于把握：先描述图画，之后分两段来说城市化的利与弊，最后下结论。
Sample：
In the picture； we see a newly emerging munity： there are supermarkets； schools； banks and hospitals。 A resident tells us； “Eight years ago it was still the countryside。” The history of reform and openingup is the history of rapid economic development； it is also the history of largescale urbanization of our nation。
I firmly believe that the advantages of urbanization are many。 First； when more and more people flood into cities； the city is often being bigger and bigger and many people move out of the downtown area and into the suburbs。 This trend of urban construction is beneficial to future city development as a whole。 Second； it provides more development opportunities for big cities。 With more and more people ing to the city； urban development is experiencing a new round of leaping forward。
Urbanization may also bring a series of unfavorable consequences。 First； the farmland in the country is shrinking。 Second； sometimes； the rural land； rivers and air are polluted。 When more and more new factories are set up； the surrounding environment is likely to decay。 In my mind； it is not necessarily the result。 Finally； the young people who still practice farming are being fewer and fewer。 Some of them go to big cities to pursue a better life。 Some of them stay at home； but begin to do business or work in local factories。
All in all； urbanization b
